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Marcus said in August 20th, 2009 at 12:45 am

I’d suggest that next time you use less content. It looks a bit busy and unfortunately has a ’spammy’ feel to it. Obviously you’re intentions were the opposite. You have a legit tool and service you’re offering to a direct crowd. Less is more, especially with email campaigns. Keep it high level in the campaign and let the destination of the links within the email sell it. I think you’d see a significant amount more click throughs, and ultimately that would lead to more conversions.

Thanks for sharing this info Dave!

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Dave Dugdale said in August 20th, 2009 at 6:48 am

Marcus,

Thanks for the advice, I think you are right. Next time I try it I will write less.

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myapartmentmap said in August 20th, 2009 at 9:48 am

I wonder how many property managers would be interested in the scammer related tools/widgets? To me, this seems like something potential renters would be interested in as this is who it is geared towards(educating tenants) and not necessarily landlord/property managers.

With your next mailing, how about just promoting the tools/widgets landlords/property managers would be interested in? The free templates and mapping tool seem most relevant to their needs.

Good luck!

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Robbie said in August 23rd, 2009 at 9:27 am

Dave,
As we discussed….Don’t forget the “CALL TO ACTION”
That will dramatically increase your clicks.

Don’t get discouraged this is only the first email you have sent so far.

It takes time for users to get to know you and then eventually they will be curious to give pickrent a try.

Just be persistent and don’t give up!

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Efar said in August 31st, 2009 at 7:53 am

I absolutely agree with Marcus – less is more and getting right to the point works best. You have some great tools – try different things to see what works best for you.

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John said in September 6th, 2009 at 11:56 am

In addition to what the others have said I’d suggest checking for typos (to/too) and checking how “Free Rental Scam Tools” sounds to someone who is not familiar with your tools and services.

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Rent It Today said in September 10th, 2009 at 6:20 am

I thought the layout of the email blast was well done. Your biggest issue is you need to get more email addresses. “The Law of Averages” You did get some branding out of it. It takes the average person 16 times to see something in-order for them to truly remember it. Keep working on it.

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anon said in October 13th, 2009 at 10:59 am

[1] Did you send an email that these people were not interested in?
[2] Are scams something that property managers are interested in?
[3] Maybe using the word scam in the title caused many emails to go to junk mail folders…
[4] Maybe it should have been more positive and less negative? Instead of “free rental scam tools”, maybe “imcrease the number of leads by removing scammers”

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